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Dear Sherry As I woke up, I shielded my eyes from the sun that poured through the oak window. My body laid in crisp white sheets as flashbacks rushed through my mind. “‘…Do you want to?’” “‘…I don’t know, I don’t think we should.’” “‘…We’ll be fine, don’t worry.’” I pushed myself up against the bed’s backboard and rubbed my temples, I felt nauseas and sore. I climbed out of my warm bed, rapped a bed sheet around my body, and twisted it into a knot above my chest. Items seemed in disorder as I walked through my loft bedroom. While glancing over the loft, I spotted a folded piece of paper leaning against the vase on the dinner table. I unfolded the paper and began to read the note. “Dear Sherry, Thanks for a great night. We should do it again sometime. Ps. welcome to the world of AIDS. -You’re Infector” Thump thump, thump thump. My heart raced. I felt numb; there was something in my throat that I 3 just couldn’t swallow. The note dropped to the table, knocking something to the floor. My eyes never wandered to the floor, my heart ached too much to care. Once again, flashbacks raced through my mind from the begin of the night to the end. “‘…Would you like to dance?’” “‘…Sure, I’d love to.’” The words, “Your Infector.” echoed in my mind. “Tommy? Tom? Tomas? Timmy? Troy?” I repeated to myself trying to remember his name, for the alcohol fogged my memory. “‘…Hi, I’m Tristan.’” “‘…Hey, Nice to meet you. I’m Sherry.’” I paced around the loft as tears moistened my cheeks. The bed sheet fell to the floor as I walked to the bathroom and started the shower. Immediately, steam filled the tiny plain room and fogged the mirror. I closed my eyes as the water poured from the showerhead onto my face. “I can wash it away, everything will be alright.” I kept repeating these words, trying to fool myself into believing them, even though I knew it wasn’t true. When I was in the shower I felt pure. Turning the knob all the way to the left was the hardest thing to do, my moment of purity was over and I 4 was insecure about everything. I stepped out of the shower; right foot, then left and wiped the mirror clear of fog. While checking my reflection, in the smudged mirror, an unclear figure crept behind me and passed through the door. Puddles of water formed under my feet as I followed the figure through the doorframe. “Who’s there?” I received no answer. Thump thump, thump thump. My heart raced. I peeked around the wall, that separated the bathroom from the living room, and held my breathe. The floor crept under my feet as I approached the dark figure. My hand shook as I reached for the overcoat that covered a body. One, two, three. Swoosh, the overcoat fell to the ground. Beep, beep, beep. “Good morning New York City, you’re listening to W.T.B.A and its 7:00 Am. It’s starting to feel a lot like winter with a temperature of 34°F, time to take those winter jackets out of the clos-” I slapped my hand on the off button, as the alarm clock fell to the floor. My body jerked up and I scratched my neck gasping for air. Confused and unsure of myself I got out of bed and inspected my loft. I glanced at the vase and to my surprise, there was no note waiting to be read. My eyes wandered around in concern and fear that someone was lingering within my loft. 5 It was 11:00 Am, and I was waiting for the paper boy to drop of my paper. I sat in my overstuffed chair and light filled the room, as I turned the television on. “Breaking News” flashed on the screen. I tried to listen to the report, but when the young news caster said those words, “The Infector”, my heart sank. Boom, boom, boom. I walked to my door, opened it, and picked up the fresh newspaper. The front page read, “Young women meet their infector.” I ran my hand under my eyes to clear the tears. This can’t be happening, I thought. “Was it a sign? Could I have helped them?” I kept asking myself questions that couldn’t be answered. I turned off the television, put the newspaper on the dinner table, and ran into my bedroom to change. I pulled a jogging suit out of my bureau and grabbed a pair of Nikes out of the closet. I rushed to put everything on and I ran out the front door. While on the fourth floor, I clicked the auto start for my car and continued jogging down two more flights of stairs. I had to clear my mind, driving into the quiet country would help sooth my shaken nerves. I drove to a familiar place, where my mother and I took daily walks together. We called it The tranquil pond. The little crystal clear pond held an abundant amount of lily pads. Catninetails were sporadically placed around the pond and in the cluster of trees you could 6 hear the baby birds chirping high in their nest as their mothers fed them. This was the one place I could clear my mind and forget about everything. I laid on the green ground and watched as the puffy white clouds passed by. Some were short and fluffy and other were long and skinny but every single one look beautiful against the deep blue sky. The sky turned grey. Within minutes I was once again in a pure moment, with water gently sprinkling my hands and face. It felt bizarre; laying there like a lifeless weed, with its roots soaking up the water, waiting to bloom into a beautiful flower once again. Memories of my childhood rush through my mind as I walked to my car; with my head still looking to the clouds. “What would she tell me to do right now?” I pondered “Mom? Are you up there, Mom? Well if you can hear me I really need you to me help right now! I think I can help these poor women, but the truth is I’m scared. I don’t know what to do, I need you Mom, I need you more than ever right now.” I lowered my head and continued walking to my car. The windshield wipers moved left to right in attempt to clear the now torrential rain. On the car ride home all I could think about was my mother. She had been my world from the age of seven, when my father died, till the day of her death. My mother had died from a doctor’s misdiagnose. The Doctors kept telling 7 her she suffered from the Flu, but my mother knew she was very sick, and it wasn’t the Flu that caused her to become fatigued and receive rashes. She had AIDS. My mother was a nurse. When she was pricked by a dirty needle she knew it would only be time before she started getting sick. My mother died two years ago, when I was twenty one. Thinking about my mother made me tune out all my surroundings. The hour ride home seemed like only fifteen minutes. There were no parking spots on the street. That meant I had to park in the garage, on the side of the apartment building. The garage was dark and humid. A sinister feeling gathered in the steamy air. Footsteps echoed as I walked to the Exit door. My heart began to beat rapidly when I discovered the echoed footsteps were not mine. I glanced over my shoulder and found no one pacing behind me. I turned the corner in front of a sliver Honda and looked into the round mirror that was mounted onto the wall above me. In the mirror I spotted a man clad in black, crawl behind the small Honda. “Who’s there?” I shouted demanding an answer, but received none. “I said who’s there? Come out I know you’re behind there!” My heart was in my throat once again. I weaved through the cars, hoping the man would not follow my demands. Footsteps echoed in the garage again. In fear, I dropped to the ground and pulled myself under a large SUV. 8 “Who’s hiding now?” a man shouted, breaking the silence. I kept my head low to the ground, watching the floor to see when his feet appeared in front of me. I hid, silent, for what seemed forever. “I know you’re in here. Come out; come out, wherever you are.” There was a brief pause. “Oh Sherry Dear, why don’t you be a good little girl and come and play with YOUR INFECTOR!” A pair of blue Nikes appeared in front of the SUV and it felt as if my heart had stopped beating. I held my breathe; trying not to make a sound. I watched as the Nikes walked by my hiding spot. Hot air was released in relief. My body laid still, in fear he would come back. His sneakers were nowhere in sight, but I heard the heavy footsteps, pounding on the concrete. My ankle ached; I looked over my shoulder straight into a set of evil eyes. My skin scraped again the cement, as I was being pulled. “Please, stop!” I pleaded. “Let me go!” My foot slammed into the side of his face. The evil man let go of my ankle and held his face as he knelt on the ground. I crawled out from under the car, and began to run away, in fear for my life. “Who are you?” I sobbed. “Who am I? You mean you haven’t heard of me? I did not answer the mystery man. 9 “Sherry, It’s me Tristan.” I hid behind a pile of boxes next to the elevator. I closed my eyes, hoping when I opened them, I would awaken from a dream; This never happened. He was close, his scent lingered after he walked by the boxes. He didn’t make a sound, which made it harder to tell where he stood. “Boo.” Tristan whispered as he crashed the boxes. He pulled me away from the wall and did what he pleased. “Stop please.” I laid there on the cement numb. Not crying and barely breathing. Rolling to my side I attempted to pick myself up. My body was weak, and I fell to the ground. My second try was a success. I walked slowly to the exit door being cautious with every move. As I exited the garage, my eyes grew wet. I collapsed in the middle of sidewalk sobbing uncontrollably. “Sherry Williams. Sherry, can you hear me?” I heard a man mumbling but I couldn’t make out the words. Slowly, I opened my eyes and looked around. I laid on a chilled slab in a room that was filled of pictures from my past, me and my mother at the tranquil pond, my father and I at my sixth birthday, me reading my first book, and tons of other photos I had never seen before. There was a large blank screen on the wall in front of me. It looked like a projector screen but there was no projector in the room. As I glanced around, I found no windows, nor doors. 10 A puff of smoke exited my lips as I spoke softly. “Hello.” I whispered. “Where am I? What happened?” I sat up, and twisted my body to hang my legs over the side of the stainless steal slab. A chill shot up my spine as my bare feet touched the tiled floor. I wrapped my arms in front of me, and my lips quivered. It was cold. Spider veins began to show in my pale legs and arms. Where was I? I wonder. How did I get here? I paced around the white room, looking at the many pictures. The one that caught my eye was one that I had never seen before. It was of me, my mother and father. I had to of have been about two years old and the three of us were cuddled in my parents bed. It must have been winter, you could see the fluffy white snow that covered the yard through the window, I laid between my mother and father fast asleep. You could see the passion in my parents’ eyes for each other. My father was gently kissing my mother’s forehead as she smiled with glee. We looked like a picture perfect family. “She‘s in a comma from the trauma, is there anyone from her family we can call?” “No doctor, she has no one. Her father died when she was seven and her mother pasted ago two years ago.” “Okay, just keep an eye on her and let me know if there is any improvement. I‘ll find someone for this poor girl." 11 “Yes doctor.” I heard the mumbling voice again but I could make out his words. I looked around trying to see where this voice was coming from. I walked over to the blank screen and gently ran my fingers over it. With the touch of my finger tips the blank screen flashed on. It began to play video clips of my childhood. Birthday parties, family reunions, and my father’s funeral. As I watched my fathers’ funeral I began to wish he was here. The more I began to think about him, more videos of him played. It seemed as if what I was thinking about was being played on the screen. How can this be I wondered? I started to think of my mother and she showed on the screen. “Is this here to help me? What am I suppose to do? ” I shouted in an empty room. I sat on the chilled tile floor with my legs crossed and my head lowered in my hands. I began to think of the garage. The smell of that man. His cold touch. His taunting voice. The icy blue eyes that held nothing but evil. I raised my head and looked towards the screen. There were small photos collaged together. Those icy blue eyes, his lips, his blue Nikes and his black jacket. The more I thought about him, more pictures flew onto the screen.
Answer: it's great! Just a few minor grammatical errors but it was really good. Somehow, it just pulled me in. I'd love to read the rest.
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Here I am, standing in fear and shock. Blood is dripping from my hands and feet. I pull out the gun and stare at it. I scream What have I done?! My life, my dreams, everything I know will be taken away from me! I look down at the body and I see that he looks so peaceful. He didn’t deserve to die, he was only asking me for money but I felt so angry, he wouldn’t leave me alone so I took out the gun and I shot him. I know I’ll be okay; I just have to think of a way out. I pick up the body and walk down to the river. I keep turn my head and I see an elderly woman staring at me, judging me. I break down and cry. I just didn’t care anymore, I just ran. I won’t mind if they eventually find me because it doesn’t matter, I’ve become a lost cause. what do you think????????? oh yeah..please excuse the grammar errors etc etc...as it is only a draft
Answer: Its very dry. There is not much descriptive language so it seems gray and dull. Here something like this The numbness of shock washes over me, I barely notice the sticky syrup of thickening blood still dripping from my hands and pooled at my feet. I examine the gun once more, my eyes blur and begin to water as the realization of what has transpired dawns on me. "What have I done!" I scream so hard my voice cracks. In an instant, a muzzle flash and the smell of gun smoke, that is all it took to change me, my life, my dreams, everything I knew, everything I was, it has changed now. It will all be taken away. My eyes, still burning, shift to the serene lax features of his face, he is so peaceful now. What is this silent untamed rage, a beast within me that lusts for carnage. So much anger and hate, a seething burning desire took me. I over reacted, I realize this now He did not deserve to die. He was harmless, a drifter begging for change, but he kept nagging his eyes pleading. Unrelenting he would not give in, dogging my every step. So I snapped. It was too late, the gun was in my hand as though it had a mind of its own. My ears are still ringing from the weapons discharge and now panic is setting in, but I have to keep calm. I can think of a way, I have to do something. There must be a way out, think, I must think quickly. you know like that nice start though
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This is my first draft. Please be honest. Just tell me if youd read it. It was one of those days when everything changes at once. Or, rather, it was night; the type of night that is not in complete darkness, but which is cast in strange, silver shadows by the full moon. The first thing to happen was that Isabelle Serova decided she had to leave. She was struck suddenly by the fact that she was seventeen years old and had done nothing so far with her life that was really worth remembering. So, two hours after midnight, she scribbled a quick note to her parents and left. The second important thing happened just minutes later. The man was dressed in black, balaclava pulled low to hide his features. He was silent and stealthy as he moved through the shadows, and, approaching the window, clicked it open with ease. He considered himself a professional. He was nothing compared with the person who arrived an hour later. Luckily for him, he was gone by then. The white dog crept so silently that her paws might not have been touching the ground. The bushes close around her never rustled. She kept in the long shadows under the evergreen trees, winding between the tree trunks. She found the window unlocked and leaped through it in one quick, powerful motion. It was dark. She could hear steady breathing somewhere on a floor above her. But they wouldn’t hear her- they were human. She was like a ghost in the darkness. It took only seconds for her to reach the grand piano in the corner of the Serovas’ huge living room. Another couple of seconds later and the dog had vanished. In its place was a woman, tall and thin, her long, blonde hair waved down her back and framed her pale skinned face. Her eyes were liquid gold. Like a wolf’s. The werewolf reached under the cover of the piano and pulled it open, letting it rest on its hinges. Her keen eyes scanned through the chords inside. In an instant, she knew. What she wanted wasn’t there. But it had to be. She checked again, in case she’d missed it in her excitement; but she knew that would never, ever happen. Scarlett Avilon was not accustomed to losing. She didn’t like it one tiny little bit. God help the person who fed her false information. She was on the phone in a flash. “Jamie?” “Yes, miss Avilon?” her assistant’s voice answered. “Get the informant on the phone.” Jamie was hiding in the bushes outside. He grumbled and shifted his weight so that a briar didn’t stick into his backside. “Talk”, he grunted, thrusting the phone to the girl beside him. Something had gone wrong; his boss was angry. He would not like to be that Serova girl now. Isabelle took the phone disdainfully. Who knew when the man had last washed his hands, after all? But she held it to her ear all the same. Scarlett Avilon’s voice was cold and deadly. “Are you going to tell me the truth, Isabelle? Or do I have to extract the information via…other methods?” Isabelle shivered involuntarily. Jamie grinned; she threw him a look that plainly told him she wasn’t going to back down. That was a Serova trademark. All of them were the same- headstrong and conceited. Had been that way for centuries. “I told you the truth” she said stubbornly. “We had a deal, didn’t we? It’s inside the piano.” “It’s not there now. Did you check it before you left?” “I didn’t know you before I left this morning. Why would I have checked it?” Scarlett had to agree- it was a fair argument. Isabelle had been running away from home when Scarlett had met her. She’d been like gold dust to the werewolf- a girl with insider’s information of the house. The knowledge she needed had been easily bought from the girl. “Who else has been in the house?” Isabelle thought, tapping manicured fingernails against the tree trunk beside her absent-mindedly. “Since Monday? That’s when I last saw it. So…just my Aunt Val…and our neighbours, Rhea and her daughter Demeter.” There was a pause. A long, tense pause, when nobody even breathed. “Rhea? Rhea Kavanagh?” Scarlett’s voice was tinged with something close to disbelief. She would have sworn, but Scarlett Avilon was nothing if not composed. She did swear in her head, however; she called Rhea Kavanagh every name under the sun and a lot more besides, because she knew exactly who had taken her Stone. Scarlett Johannson doesnt have red hair, to answer someones question. Thats not where I got the name, though- theres a little girl who lives near me called Scarlett. She doesnt have red hair, either. I know its confusing but all these characters do link up later in the book...*
Answer: The story is good. But it confused me a bit. In the beginning, and middle of your draft. I don't understand how it was Isabelle, then turned to a man, then turned to a dog, then Scarlett. I mean, I know its your first draft, and obviously, you haven't finished, but the dog and the man doesn't have any use of this. And it also confused me to the part of where Scarlett was on the phone with her assistant, Jamie. How did Jamie stay with Isabelle? Where did Isabelle go if she ran away? How does Isabelle know Scarlett? Like I said, I know that you haven't finished, and its your very first draft, but please try to give hints of answers of what I asked. But out of that, good story. I hope you like my answer :)
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First Paragraph, would you be interested in reading this?

Theres a loud buzzer going off in the room, and my head is pounding. Im not quite sure where I am as my eyes try to adjust to very bright lights peering in. A young nurse pulls back the heavy brown curtains in my room, and then I remember where Im at. All these fears and thoughts start running through my head. Im in Hell, otherwise known as The Polson Treatment Center, Im in rehab. I sit up in my bed, as the overly friendly and cheerful nurse comes to my bedside, my long dark hair is matted to my face, Im sure my mascara is smeared, Im almost certain I look white as a ghost. And then comes the pain. "I need a bucket" I mumble. "Whats that you say sweetie?" The nurse says in her thick southern accent. " I need a bucket," I now shout "Im going to throw up." Rubbing my back, as my head lays low, the nurse begins to speak. "Thats just the withdrawal, youll be ok in a few days, your bodys just getting used to not having the drugs in it." I look up, trying to make out this womans sweet face. "Where is the shower?" I ask quietly, I still have it in my head that Im going to shower, get dressed, meet Cara for lunch, mimosas, and shopping. "Louise." The nurse says as shes helping me out of my bed. "What?" I ask her puzzled. "My name is Louise, Ill be your day nurse." she says as Im ushered into a putrid lime green bathroom, the decor alone is going to make me more sick. The water from the shower hits my face, the warmth of it is comforting. I open my eyes, this is it I tell myself, for the first time, in a long time Im really alone. I look down at my skin, my fake tan is washing away in the shower, some of my acrylic nails are missing, and I wonder how I let it all go away. I step out of the shower, grabbing the towel I look in the mirror at my five foot eight body, I see my bones protruding, my face so thin. I hardly recognize myself, and then comes the pain again, I lunge to the toilet, and as I sit there, on the cold floor, hugging the porcelain thrown, my life for the past two years flashes in front of me. My eyes closed, I see images of people, bright lights, loud music, Cara toasting me with a glass of Moet, me in my little Bebe dress, and then the drugs. As a flash of cocaine lying on a table, and me taking a hit off of it, I snap back into reality. flushing the toilet, I try and stand on my feet. I almost lose my balance, but I manage to stumble to the bed. I lay down and look around. No phone, no TV., no computer. Just a bed, a dresser, and a window. I pull the heavy blanket over my head and just wish it would all go away. It would be three days, before I start to feel some what normal, well normal meaning walking on my own, not running to the bathroom every twenty minutes to throw up, and no more night sweats. http://www.myspace.com/confessionsofasocialclimb ok so thank you to all of you for your opinions... technically its not the first paragraph, its bunched together because i wasnt sure how many "Characters" I was allowed to have on here. It is actually spaced out in the book format. I am aware that it needs editing, right now im just in the process of writing. and this is loosely based on my life and what has happend to me. The withrawls, as the person at the bottom stated. I do not want to say what shes withdrawling from/ her full situation. it will be revealed later on. you can go to my website, and read the first 7 chapters. the book is called Confessions of a Social Climber. http://www.myspace.com/confessionsofasocialclimb
Answer: dont stop writing edit in the end ok!! it sounds interesting and something i would read again lots of edeting but dont worry about that you can do that when you are done good luck and wish you the best for this story:)
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can somebody explain the movie max paine?

Answer: Max Payne (2008) Coming together to solve a series of murders in New York City are a DEA agent whose family was slain as part of a conspiracy and an assassin out to avenge her sister's death. The duo will be hunted by the police, the mob, and a ruthless corporation The opening shot starts with Max Payne (Mark Wahlberg) in the water, he is drowning and comes up for air, gasping again and again. Then he gives up and starts sinking. He comments on how there are many dead people at the bottom, all reaching up for him and the criminals are welcoming him as one of their own, but he didn't belong there - but soon no one would be left alive who would know any different. As he is thinking that, he cuts to him walking and seeing his dead wife and implied dead child. One Week Earlier Two detectives walk in, one is showing another around and into the cold case files - both have been put on desk duty because of 'some unknown problem.' Max Payne is sitting at the desk in cold case, looking at files. The new guy tries to be friendly, but Max just shoots him a blank look and goes back to his files. When the new detective asks the other what's going on, it is explained that his wife and son were both killed and to leave the man alone. (You never see these two again - it was just to set up where Max Payne worked.) Max Payne then goes and puts a file back into a drawer after slipping a paper into it. A top shot of him cleaning his guns and then loading up. He is walking down an underground subway station. There are three junkies sitting on a bench, shaking - obviously needing a fix. They look at Max walking past them and it zooms in on his watch, gold, ticking. Max goes into the men's bathroom and the three follow him in. One of the junkies drops a half-empty vial of something that was obviously a narcotic Max washes his hands, putting the watch carefully on the side of the sink. One of the thugs comes in, tells him that he wants the watch and it's his. Max replies that it 'was' his, but it was pawned off. The thug asks Max if he's following them, Max says no, and points to the man on the right - a small, squirrelly looking character with a mustache, saying that he's following him - Doug. The big thug pulls out a gun and points it at Max's head, telling the small guy to get the watch. As the man moves forward, Max grabs him, the gun fires, the mirror breaks. One man goes running, the big thug is dead; the small guy is hiding in the stalls. Max pulls out a big snub-nosed .50 cal revolver and starts blowing the doors away, the man running just ahead of the bullets under the stalls. Finally, at the last stall, Max grabs the man and asks who his partner was, but the junkie just gibbers about wings - Max notices that there is a wing tattooed on the man's arm. The other junkie who ran at the first sight of trouble is now running down the empty subway tracks. Shadows appear on the wall, winged creatures following him making noises and rustles. He falls to the ground, batting away the wings on his knees. He is terrified. Finally, he starts screaming and a train comes, making a satisfying squishing sound with a red flash. Max is at a door; it opens, showing an overly dressed, oily looking character - Trevor (Andrew Friedman). Max tells his snitch that the lead didn't pan out, the guy was crazy. Trevor says he's out of ideas and tries to close the door on him, but Max muscles through and stares at Trevor's 'dinner party.' He tells him that either he can come up with something new, or that he'll start frisking everyone in the party. Natasha (Olga Kurlyenko) walks up and starts putting the moves on Max who notices that she also has a large tattoo of a wing on her arm - similar to the one on the junkie. As they are talking, a smaller woman (Mona - Mila Kunis) who is leading a large group of thuggish men, comes up and asks what Natasha is doing there. Natasha says she's safe and that Max is a cop, so she'll be fine. When Mona grabs the other woman, Max breaks it up and Natasha leaves with Max. Max is waiting for Natasha and goes into the back part of the club/house/party, looking through a crack in the door and seeing an orgy going on along with people drinking some of the blue liquid. A man (Jack Lupino - Amaury Nolasco) steals up near him and they stare at each other, having a face down. Jack has tattoos everywhere. Natasha comes in and stands between the two men, taking Max away. When they get back to Max's house, Natasha just wants sex and starts badmouthing the 'other woman' in Max's life. This causes him to go into a quiet and scary rage and tells her to get out. Natasha storms out and starts walking down the alley near Max's apartment. She makes a call to Owen, asking him for a fix. The wings on the walls start following her, fluttering back and forth. She runs frantically down the alley, snow falling everywhere. Jack is on the rooftops, looking down and smiling. Finally, she falls and looks up,
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I apologize for the length, but I know youll enjoy it! I hope..... Music is said to be the bridge between Heaven and Earth. With it, we connect with our souls and of those around us, whether seen or unseen. I myself have touched the soul of one, deeper than the rest. His name was Keagan. It was a cold December night and I was sitting on the curb of Heavitree Road, plucking at the strings of my steel stringed acoustic. The air was bitter and chilled and I wrapped my shawl tighter around my shoulders. Although there were not any pedestrians around, I stayed where I was. Who knows, maybe the second richest man in the world would come walking by in the most curvaceous clothing while I staggered to my shelter beneath the canopy of trees in the park. I sighed and watched a puff of steam rise above my head and get swept away by the wind. I peered down at my left hand and strummed. I played the ballad Verner Raven and swayed in the wind as the familiar story wrapped around my heart and pulled at my emotions. “Lustily flies the Verner Raven, high o’er the wall he’s flown, for he was aware that Irmindlin fair sate in her bower alone. He southward flew and he…” “You should go home, little miss.” I looked up, startled by the interruption. The shadow of a man blocked the street lamp and hovered over me. “No home to go to, sir,” I replied sharply, finishing my song with numb fingers. “Well, in that case…” I was grabbed by the upper arm and drawn back off the curb. “What-” “You’re no little girl,” the man growled. “You’re a demon.” I sucked in a breath of cold air and slammed the body of my guitar into the man’s side. He immediately let go and grabbed for my instrument. I dropped it – but not without shedding a tear – and began to run towards Paris Street. “Get back here!” The man barked, and I heard my wonderful guitar smash to the pavement. I gulped and pumped my legs even harder until I reached the intersection. I stood for a split second before veering left onto Western Way. Once I had passed Dix’s Field, I slowed to an exhausted saunter, and then fell to my knees. I managed my way off the road and leaned my back against a tree. I laid my arms over my eyes. Lights flashing, men shouting, dogs barking; they’re all chasing you. Into the Cathedral and under a pew. Will they find you? Yes. I opened my eyes looked up at the moon. “Almost full,” I croaked, my throat sore from dehydration. I let my body go slack against the trunk of the tree and closed my eyes again. This time, it was black nothingness – no bad memories. I sighed, pulled my knees to my chest, and fell into a deep sleep. I rose with the morning. As I stood carefully, using the tree for support, I noticed a faint sound on the wind. I ran my fingers through my light brown, shoulder length hair and took to the road, following the sound. After about a mile, I came to an abandoned home – or so it seemed at first. From the inside, there was a beautiful sound, a sound I knew well. Tears welled up in my eyes as I walked up to the small, ramshackle house and knocked gently on the door. The music abruptly stopped and there was the resonance of bare feet on wood. The thin, wooden door opened slowly and a girl peered through at me. “May I help you?” She asked politely, opening the door a little bit more. “I heard a guitar coming from inside this house, yes? I would just like to know who was playing, is all.” The girl’s face showed a hint of trepidation as she nodded. “That was my father, playing for my brother,” she said quietly. “Who is it, May?” A male voice, deep and strong, called from somewhere deep in the house. “It is a woman,” she called back. “Only curious,” I followed. “Let her in, May.” The girl’s mouth set in a grim line as she opened up the door and motioned for me to step inside. The house was diminutive and dusty. Everything was wood, except for the stove and wash bin. At the moment, a small fire blazed in the fireplace in the family room and I smiled. “How cozy,” I said, meaning it. May scoffed and I bit my bottom lip. “Father,” She said as we walked into another room. The man stood up and I gulped. He must have been at least seven feet tall. He had bright, expressive green eyes and tangled dark brown hair, a strapping physique and a farmer’s tan. “I apologize for the order of our home,” he said in a baritone voice. “My wife has recently passed and we need more time to recover.” He smiled. “My name is Roldan and these are my children; May and Durriken.” Durriken was a young boy with pale features, but sharp green eyes – like May. Twins, I decided. He was lying on a small cot in the middle of the room. “I am Faun,” I introduced myself. “I only come here because I heard the sound of a guitar. Am I right?” Roldan beamed and nodded. “I was singing to Durriken,” he said, “because he is not well. But I have had this guitar for many years and I love to play. So I play while I pray to God for the wellness of my son.” I smiled softly. “I a
Answer: That's amazing...please write more because now I want to read the rest of the story! :D
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Please critique my creative writing?

The below is just a draft beginning I have to a creative writing which is in progress. Please tell me what you think of it! ;D *** The washroom smelled of a nasty odor left behind from all the piles of dirty dishes. The hot water ran ferociously through the taps as Nick examined the plugholes in the sinks. “OUCH!” he screamed as he felt the temperature of the water rising to boiling point. A woman with orange hair walked in. “Can you hurry with the washing up PLEASE, NICK!! I want you on your break before half past! GOT IT?” “Yeah, no worries…” Nick replied, not fully aware of the velocity of the woman’s voice, which now seemed to mumble away from the washroom and onto the echoes of the kitchens… No, he was in far too much pain after burning his right hand in the hot sinks. It left a sharp, stinging sensation which pierced to the core of his skin. “Are you alright, Nick?” asked a familiar voice. Nick recognized it as Hannah, his friend and fellow colleague, who walked into the scene abruptly. “Give me your hand.” She said. Nick obliged reluctantly, pulling his hands apart. But not long after he felt the burning sensation return, and he let out an angry cry, “ARRGH!! It stings!” Hannah held it, examined it carefully and without warning let go, which resumed the burning sensation. She looked at her friend and sighed, “I’m going to get Erica.” “NO! It’s ok!” Nick reassured, trying to hold back the sting in his right hand, but the pain in his eyes was all too obvious for Hannah, who would buy none of it. She knew when her friends were trying to hide things from her, but Nick wasn’t exactly the best at selling his stories. She could tell right through his pain-stricken expressions – you didn’t have to be a rocket scientist to sense the agony in Nick’s voice. “Are you kidding me?” She pointed to his burnt hand, “You’re clearly in pain!” “I’ll be alright!” Nick retorted. “Look, I know you’re worried about making a fuss, but it’ll be ok, don’t worry!” And with that, she ran to the office which sat in front of the washroom, and just behind the kitchens. Workers speculate that it was placed there specifically so that the managers could spy on their crew, ridiculing their every move. It was no understatement when crew trainer Wendy Redfield said to the new batch of kitchen hands that ‘food and politics don’t mix in the kitchen’. Nick heard the sounds of timers going off, new orders were flashing onto the kitchen’s ordering screens every minute. Nigel the front manager slammed his fist against the food containment area, almost instantly burning it. The service men and women, all lined up against their registers in their neat and tidy shirts, vests, and aprons jumped in fright simultaneously. Ok guys, perhaps I should have explained myself a bit better when I posted it. Its a story about a guy who works in a fast food restaurant and is in the process of deciding whether he should quit the job or not, and is your typical angsty teen wondering where he belongs in the world. The story is based on my own experiences working at a fast food store, and I tried to capture the chaos of the kitchen. Thanks for all the feedback so far and Ill try to improve my writing.
Answer: Okay, my first question is what is this even about? Washing dishes? If it is, chose a more exciting topic next time because I just read it to critique, not for enjoyment. If this is a fictional story, put maybe that Erica and Hannah are long lost witches that heal people, and you could have a novel right there. If it's a real story, can't you at least add SOMETHING worthwhile to read in it? Like how his arm looked and who Erica and Hannah were? Just explain the plot better really, and put more depth into the characters. Happy Writing!
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What was the last thing about a public restroom that made you laugh?

I had to bomb pearl harbor while eating at McDonalds ^_^" I went in and the only other person there was a really old janitor (id say he was about 60-80 years old). Well, I go and I sit down. All the sudden, all you hear is me ripping one. All I heard after wards was "holy s***" from the old man. I laughed so hard. Im a boy, btw; people seem to think im a girl on here from some reason (is it the pink?)
Answer: ( :P Awesome. ^__^ Cool. You have to be the only person I've heard say they play the pan pies. ) And I laughed so hard I started choking. You bombed pearl harbor? Shame. D:< Um.... My imagination is pretty wild so I could totally see the old man mopping and then this loud...... noise.... and him cursing and then creepy laughing coming from the bathroom stall. And then.. ugh.. mcdonalds. Well prepare for another long answer I was supposed to be dropping something off at the office but my shirt was like rising and getting caught in my belt so I went to the bathroom to fix it. FIRST mistake. So I went in the stall and I'm fixing my shirt and I hear this whistle and this familiar nasal voice. And Im like... " NOO." In my mind of course. D:< I don't have hall monitors at my school.... but I mean... d:< This girl was a snitch AND SHE JUST HAPPENED TO BE IN MY SAME CLASS AND HAD HEARD ME CLAIM I WAS GOING TO GO DROP OFF A FORM AT THE MAIN OFFICE. D:< So I'm sitting there praying that she doesn't decide to go kicking open bathroom stalls ( * flashback * I do that. So I like walk in and go PI-YOW! * and kick them open * XD When I'm like bored) So I hear someone fiddle with the doors and what SOUNDS like LOCKING O___O So I stay super quiet and I peek to see Eleanor standing there in the mirror and like flashing these ridiculous poses. It took all my willpower not to laugh. Then she attempts to dance and trust me, seeing some chic wave her butt in front of your face. IS NOT a pleasant experience. And she like started crumping and I was like... Lord take me now. she like threw her back out our something because next thing I know she has a hand to her back and is wincing. I was so close to laughing then. XD THAT ISN'T EVEN THE BEST PART. There's this kid name Gale and well she was obviously heads over heels for him so she goes in the mirror and says, in this deep voice, and starts saying stuff like " BABE." AND she switches back and forth between Gale and then herself as a reaction like Gale a.k.a her : hey Her: Hey XD I was like on the floor gasping I'm surprised she didn't see me but she finally left and I like crawled out laughing. Ok... so you know I like to keep things innocent... O_O and well....my innocent was ruined. Think pedobear ok D:< Not to long ago I was in the GIRLS restroom washing my hands and I hear this loud laughter. Ok. so the boys restroom is on one side the girls on the other but theres like this foyer area were both guys and girls walk through to get to the bathroom. Some woman had her kids here and well o____o their such lovely kids. I was washing my hands and the door bursts open and this kid waddles in with his pants pulled down and... O.o you get the point. D; I was to shocked to do anything Im just kinda gaping with the water running and my eyes widened. Then he starts laughing and turns around and bends down D:< AND IM LIKE. FRICK NO. He tried to walk up to me and LIKE HUG MY LEGS. XD So I jumped up on like the stool they had there and actually sat on the ledge of the sink. D:< Then this girl walks in I'M GUESSING IT'S HER BROTHER AND SHE BASICALLY DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING ON. And I'm like close to fainting here. ( ok... one looked like 5.. and the other 7 D:<) ... And they start laughing and she starts talking to me and all the time I'm on the sink like praying they'll go away. Then the mom I'm guessing runs in with clothes and like the mommy-pack equipped with everything and she's panting. She's holding paper and is like coaxing the boy, talking to him like he's an animal, " Hey justin. Hey boy. Come here. Mommys gonna." AND HE RUNS STRAIGHT FOR ME AND I START SHRIEKING. XD bEcause well I didn't want him to like press himself ANYWHERE on me. It was a mini hysteria concert, I was yelling and pointing, she was apologizing and screaming, they were laughing and etc. XDDDDDDD OH AND THIS IS LIKE CLASSIC. I was entering the bathroom at the cheesecake factory O_O and for basically every step I took a noise was released. It was a symphony and I kinda scared the living fluff out of myself. Then this woman started groaning and I freaked out. One woman was like talking in this foreign language all the while pushing. D:< I looked so haunted when I walked out. XDDDDD The bathroom is an interesting place. OH YEAH. :) Almost forgot XD This grown man around his 30's CLAIMED to have accidentally walked in the girls bathroom and my friend Crissy FREAKED OUT. She took off her shoe and threw it at him and he looked annoyed. XD The shoe just kinda flew and hit him on the side of his head and he just glared. Then she shouted " RAPE. HARRASSMENT. XD" It took me forever to shut her up. XD She threw both shoes btw. Yes love. It's the pink ^__^ I haven't met a lot of guys who like pink :D and if they do then their eccentric :D and amazing. ^~^ * cough * * points * It's probably the maid too.
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